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Simon J's avatar

Would love to read your guide on building a Facebook group. Excited to read your next article.

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Vin Clancy's avatar

Ok will update it!

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Vin Clancy's avatar

Okay!

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Sabrina LaBow's avatar

Excellent advice! My business is my Substack and I just started recently. If you have a moment, check out me out at sabrinalabow.substack.com. Would love to hear your thoughts:)

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Vin Clancy's avatar

1)

Should it be "I teach" not "I reach" on your landing mat.

You should include a "follow me if you xyz" e.g. "want to think clearer" or some other benefit

2)

Add a header image to your landing page/main logo, is missing one

3)

the title of your featured post does not say what they will get if they read it. Should ber way juicier, not clickable as is. I haven't heard of Sam Kinison, why would I click?

"I worked at the world's most famous comedy club for 7 years. Here's what REALLY goes on backstage" is way more clickable, for instance

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Same for all your other articles, not clickable as is

5)

Your sentences are too long. Use Hemingway App to make them shorter.

Every line needs it's own paragraph, like this.

This makes is easier to read, especially on a phone.

Read through rate is a big algorithmic plus sign on Substack.

6)

Add subscribe now buttons every screen length of text, so about every 30 sentences or so.

7)

Push each article more times on your social media

Hope this helps, I do critiques like this in my paid plan, if you join we can get into more!

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